Unit 3.6: Level 3 remix
A whole conversation that went wrong. Find each problem and write the message that fixes it.
No new rules in this unit. Instead, here is a real-looking conversation that went wrong in several ways. Your job: find each problem and write the message that would have fixed it.
මේ unit එකේ අලුත් දේවල් නෑ. පහළ තියෙන්නේ AI එකක් එක්ක කරපු, වැරදි ගොඩක් තියෙන කතාබහක්. Level 3 එකේ ඉගෙන ගත්ත දේවල් පාවිච්චි කරලා, හැම වැරැද්දක්ම හොයලා, ඒක හදන message එක ලියන්න.
The conversation
Nadeesha runs a small saree shop in Kandy and sells on Facebook. She wants a post for her Avurudu sale.
AI: 🌸 Celebrate the Sinhala and Tamil New Year with Nadeesha Fashions! Enjoy 50% OFF all sarees from Friday 4 April at our Colombo and Kandy showrooms. Free delivery island-wide! #Avurudu #Sale
AI: I'm sorry! Here is a new version: 🎉 Big Avurudu Sale at Nadeesha Fashions! 50% off everything from 4 April. Visit our showrooms in Colombo and Kandy today!
AI: Avurudu blessings from Nadeesha Fashions. Sarees 50% off from 4 April. Blouse stitching available. Call us today!
Find the problems
What went wrong?
Tap an answer. Nothing is saved.
The biggest problem in the first answer?
What is wrong with message 2?
What is the problem with 'next friday'?
What went wrong in message 3?
Which line could Nadeesha have added to message 1?
Your turn
Your turn
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Write the message Nadeesha should send instead of message 2. Fix the invented details, make the date exact, and say what to keep.
Then, if you like, write her next message: one change only.
Score it: 0, 1 or 2 for each.
Clarity
AI එකට කරන්න ඕන දේ පැහැදිලිද?
Completeness
අවශ්ය විස්තර ඔක්කොම තියෙනවද?
Structure
කොටස් හරි පිළිවෙළටද?
Internationally clear
ලංකාවෙන් පිට කෙනෙක්ටත් තේරෙනවද?
Total: 0 / 8
One way to repair it
After you have tried, compare with this:
Some details are wrong. The discount is 20%, not 50%. We have only one shop, in Kandy, and we don't offer free delivery. Please remove anything I didn't tell you.
The sale starts on Friday 11 April and ends on Sunday 20 April.
Keep the friendly Avurudu greeting.
බලන්න: එක message එකකට එක වැඩක්. හැම පාරම "Keep everything else the same". AI එක හදපු බොරු තොරතුරු (50%, Colombo showroom, free delivery) පැහැදිලිවම අයින් කරලා. දිනය හරියටම. ඒ තමයි Level 3.
Level 3 in your track
One more repair
AI: The Battle of Danture was fought in 1594 between the Kandyan kingdom and the British.
That's Level 3 done. 🎉 Next comes Level 4: Real projects.
Finished this one? Tick it off. It is saved on this device only.